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He had watched her every day for months now, engrossed with
how she moved, laughed, and how her feet barely touched the ground. Every day at the coffee shop and then in
Biology. She finally noticed him as she
cried in the corner of the library after another failed test. He was watching her quietly from a desk a few
feet away.
“What do you want?”
She pulled back the tears.
“I want to help you study.”
“Why?”
“Because you are beautiful.”
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With her scholarship on the line and her trust fund in the
balance, she let him.
They put their pencils and dropped their heads to the
table.
“The final’s in 5 hours Toby, I’m not ready.”
He stroked her back and encouraged her to sleep. “Let me
take you home to rest.”
“No Toby,” she stood and took him by the hand and led him to
his bedroom, “I need to repay you.”
She stood in front of him and disrobed. She stood naked, nervous, wanting him to
want her, to see how much she cared for
him.
“But…” he protested.
“Please,” she asked quietly.
“You know I’m….”
“Yes, Toby, I’ve known all along. He can join us if you want.”
“Then why?”
“Because you are beautiful.”
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He leaned in to kiss her and she sucked gently on his tongue. His body was on fire, “sensory overload” she
called it. She was so tight, she was so
perfect, she was Mrs. Warren, tutor, teacher, fantasy. She moved her knees up to her chest, opening
herself to him, and he felt his cock slip in deeper, the skin of his hips tingling
against the backs of her thighs. He felt
the hard slick head of his cock gliding effortlessly against her dripping pussy
walls.
“Fuck me” She whispered, “It feels good doesn’t it? It feels good to be inside me, fucking, feeling.”
“Please stop talking M’am. I’m so close...”
“Just fuck me Sebastian, I’ve wanted your cock inside me for
so long.” She giggled at her young
student’s struggle, and she squeezed his shaft with her aching cunt.
“Are you ready for more Sebastian?”
“More?”
So engrossed in the sight of her teacher’s bare skin, he
barely felt her husband’s strong hands on his shoulders.
“Fuck me Sebastian.” She pulled him down to her, opening his
hips. “It feels so good to be filled, penetrated, owned, loved and I want you
to know good you make me feel.”
Sebastian moaned as he learned exactly what she meant.
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Don’t Cum, Don’t Cum…He begged his body to hold on.
He couldn’t believe this was happening.
He looked down at her tits, her hips, her pussy, OH
FUCK!! He was fucking the captain of the
cheer squad in her own bed.
Don’t cum, don’t cum, he was desperate to make it last, to
remember everything.
Fuckmefuckmefuckme… her beer-tinged voice was a low hiss, a
desperate mantra, pushing him towards the edge.
She stopped mid-thrust, “Do you want to make this really
special?” Carla’s eyes were manic as she dialed her phone, “Johnny, get your ass
in here!”
“What the fuck?” he could barely breathe.
She kissed him giggling, “He’s always wanted me, and I’ve
always wanted two, we all win!”
He didn’t want to share her, not now, not tonight. She was finally his!
The door opened and closed and he stood there engrossed at
the scene, the party thumping outside.
“Strip Johnny” she yelled, “I’m giving you what you want!”
He shed his clothes and watched her beckon, shifting her
hips, adjusting Trevor.
He had always wanted this and she, of all people was giving
it to him.
He pressed in hard…..
“What the fuck?” yelled Trevor.
“What the hell? Thought Carla.
“Don’t Cum, Don’t Cum” muttered Johnny…..
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I don't like the word "engrossed" in this context, it's, well, gross, and brings out the wrong connotation, though the meaning is good, "enraptured" may have been my pick, but that's not the point of this little challenge is it.
I tried to capture three emotions and a little humor with each vignette (a word I do like).
My time is out, and I just run, really, before the rest of the house awakens. I really don't want to explain what I'm writing to a very curious father. :-)

5 comments:
LOL! As usual, you provide such variety in your posts. Not sure which one I like best. Maybe the cheerleader? Hmmm...
On the other hand, I can just see you blushing trying to explain to your Dad what you are writing. LOL...teeheehee... snicker!
I think our favorite is #3 as well. The change in Johnny's mood from elated to terrified is pretty funny, and the fact that the whole story comes full circle by the end makes it particularly memorable.
Maybe instead of VDA (Very Dark Advizor) we should entitle you PWA (Prolific Writing Advizor); we all, or at least I,wear our figurative pencils to a nub coming up with one story and you consistently come up with 3 good ones.
(Doffs cap)
Ram
Definite favorite for me is the second one! So sexy and raw!! I want to read more...
Word - You don't have to pick a favorite as long as you keep coming back to read what's next. As I thought about my dad I didn't have to worry, I don't think he would have understood any of my explanation anyway.... :-)
J&J - I played with that version the most, trying to get a way to circle back with a different character while staying within the word limit. I'm glad you liked it.
Ram - Oh no no no.... Keep your cap on, I just have too much time on my hands and too many stray thoughts... but I'm glad you like them. I'm honored.
VDA
O - I will admit that I got the hardest writing #2, I just read it again and started to feel that wonderful tightness....
Thanks for reading and commenting. I love FFF because there is so much creativity among my friends and writers I admire. To get your kind words means an awful lot to me.
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